Topic: Haiku

On the wave of time,
A conscious experience
Discovering Self.

Limits agreed to,
so I can re-discover
all that I am now.

All Life teaching Life,
a folding of conscious thought
around infinite.

Separate from nothing,
seeming individual -
Self discovers self.

Thoughts flow through the mind,
and focused by character,
make experience.

Attitude then shows
the lessons one is to learn,
reveals resistance.

Resistance shows us
our relationship to things,
and how to evolve.

Only Now exists,
yet we can see the pattern
we are creating.

Living the results,
of our decisions right now -
our mind sets the course.


(ok thats enough posts for today - hopefully this will get things moving along a little. Hope to hear from you guys soon)

"It's hard to advance freedom in a country that has been strangled by tyranny." - G.W. Bush 04/13/2004

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phlux,

Holy frigoles, amigo!

Is that ever a poignant piece/peace?  At least from my birds-eye view it is!  smile

Is this your creation?

Whose ever it is, I hung on every word.  It captures an otherwise "unpolishable" essence and makes it to shine right before my eyes!

From a "Cosmic Gypsy Perspective" big_smile--Thanks for sharing this... really.  You've tickled my 'lil cosmic fancy!

V

Today's mighty oak is just yesterday's nut that held its ground.
------
Life may not be the party we hoped for, but while we're here we might as well dance.
------
If you spin around on your chair really fast, things around here will make a lot more sense.

lol

3 (edited by phlux 2004-03-25 15:23:14)

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Thank you Auendove,
I am happy you liked it....
I often Haiku.

I can post others,
if you are interested.
Its a lot of fun....

"It's hard to advance freedom in a country that has been strangled by tyranny." - G.W. Bush 04/13/2004

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Intent;

Its like a funnel,
Pouring energy down, through
to experience.

Formlessness to form
through ones mindfull willingness.
Intent creates all.

Giving thanks allows,
for one to keep on flowing -
a natural state.

Looking deep within,
for only movement exists.
Still - is illusion.

"It's hard to advance freedom in a country that has been strangled by tyranny." - G.W. Bush 04/13/2004

5 (edited by Auendove 2004-03-25 15:55:58)

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And again--WOW!!! (that's the translation of Holy frijoles amigo! smile Just in case you didn't know)

Are you just writing these babies right out of thin air this evening?  Really, I'm speechless... good thing I can still write, eh? TeeHeeHeeHee!

Here's a little something from me, I wrote it many years ago when I launched myself on my Spiritual Path.

ONE

When I am One
I will have encased
all the Stars of my Sky.

One by one
Plucking
Tugging, if I must.

To be One,
in a Universe
of All.


--V

Today's mighty oak is just yesterday's nut that held its ground.
------
Life may not be the party we hoped for, but while we're here we might as well dance.
------
If you spin around on your chair really fast, things around here will make a lot more sense.

lol

6 (edited by phlux 2004-03-25 16:12:51)

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That is beautful,
a message from soul to soul.
Writing with spirit....

Wrote these earlier,
which was "on-the-fly" then, in
moments of insight.

This one is on Words -
and how I love them so much,
I hope you like it;

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Manifest my thought.
Concept bursting physical.
Realize my intent.

They convey yourself.
Crystalize realization.
Make clear position.

Words are bits of self.
To share, trade and teach.
Minds expression; Words!

"It's hard to advance freedom in a country that has been strangled by tyranny." - G.W. Bush 04/13/2004

7 (edited by Auendove 2004-03-26 07:28:37)

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Hey phlux!

You know what I realized this morning? I realized that the first Haiku can be read backwards, not per word but per stanza, and from the inside out... and it still flows beautifully?

In my initial response to you I had written:

It captures an otherwise "unpolishable" essence and makes it to shine right before my eyes.

Better written is this:

It captures an otherwise "unpolishable" essence--for how does one polish brilliance?--and makes it to shine right before my eyes.

There! I like that better, now the thought is complete.

You wrote about my poem being a "message from soul to soul."  Well this set me right on the edge of my energetic seat, in a manner of speaking, because these VERY EXACT WORDS have been said to me before about this very poem!  For the life of me I cannot remember who and when... kinda odd. 

Though it may seem "fast and furious" to ask this question, I'll throw caution to the wind--Do we know each other?  Maybe you were/are an OT member?  Did I possibly meet you through a C's function?  I wondered about this last night, and trying to think more constructively I thought--"Really V, how could this person possibly know you?"  Even so, it's a feeling not easily shaken off.

And furthermore--

When I was finished turning the Haiku upside down and inside out smile I realized that my heart center (and FCOL! not my mushy-gushy heart center, rather my energetic heart center) was justa' spiraling and calmly pulsing.  What a peaceful easy feeling!

I can't help but ask, with a large amount of tongue in cheek truth in humor as my guide--

"Hmmm.... do you frequent this frequency often?"

I am ROTFLMAO right now, even if I am serious.

As for the love of words--yep, me too.  Get a load of this--when I was in high school, almost 30 years ago (BAH!) I was on the Speech and Debate team.  In my senior year I made it to the State Finals, in the Expository speaking category, and actually ended up placing in the finals!  The topic of my speech was 'Words',  it was all about words!  Looking back on it the speech was so light hearted it was almost a comedy act.  It did get laughs.

Yeah, I like words too, seemingly for a veeeery long time wink!

--V

PS--there's another poem I want to share, but I need to find it... it has a haunting quality to it.

Today's mighty oak is just yesterday's nut that held its ground.
------
Life may not be the party we hoped for, but while we're here we might as well dance.
------
If you spin around on your chair really fast, things around here will make a lot more sense.

lol

8 (edited by Auendove 2004-03-26 07:02:52)

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Okay, that wasn't too hard to find, it's funny though--there is a reason why I always have to "go find" this piece, because still to this day, to the moment, when I read it, it makes my chest heave and I weep.  Man-oh-man!  What a weenie am I?  HA! HA! 

It's been years since I've shared it openly.

I wrote this not long after I began my Spiritual Path... no surprise, huh?  It's not uncommon for one to waltz up to rocky and rollin' life challenges on that path, is it?

Change

Keep me well
the edge is so close now.
My sight is in comprimise
and I can't see you.
My God, stand with Me.

I've dreamt within dreams,
and shared a caress with darkness.
I've overwitten the self
and fallen time and time again.
My God, stand with Me.

If only I can awaken myself
and see a more ray-ed day,
I would never do it again.
I've been so very alone.
My God, stand with Me.


BTW--if this is indeed a prayer as it has been interpreted by others, and will continue to be I'm sure--my prayer was answered. 

To be frankly honest, it was written out of sheer desperation, I knew I was in the position of fighting for my soul... or to fight for my soul.

And those lines, "I would never do it again. I've been so very alone."?  They get me everytime, even here in the here and now... even standing with "God".

--V

Today's mighty oak is just yesterday's nut that held its ground.
------
Life may not be the party we hoped for, but while we're here we might as well dance.
------
If you spin around on your chair really fast, things around here will make a lot more sense.

lol

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Don't think we have met,
not in this life - as of yet,
in the future though?

Glad you like haiku,
and write what feels good to you,
good inspiration.

"It's hard to advance freedom in a country that has been strangled by tyranny." - G.W. Bush 04/13/2004

10 (edited by Auendove 2004-03-26 12:01:33)

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phlux wrote:

Don't think we have met,
not in this life - as of yet,
in the future though?


Which future?  Snicker! Snicker!


Glad you like haiku,
and write what feels good to you,
good inspiration.


There is one other I'd like to share, prose though, but then I'm off to collect my thoughts and get with a post on FRE's.

I wrote this in college (I was a non-traditional student, older), I was in my  umpteenth sociology class studying race-relations, again.  I had become such a proficient rhetorician on racism--I had a huge paper trail of  experiences writing essays, this had taught me if one just says what "they" want to hear, and "they're" happy to tell you what to think, one "scores bigtime"--and I just couldn't stomach wretching up the same ole verbage, not even one more time.  This was supposed to be a 1000 word essay, instead I enlisted my better judgement and turned in this, damn the bigtime score.  It worked out well for me. wink


                        This Page is Black and White.


                         In this a time of Universal deceit,
                                    speaking the Truth
                                 is an [e]volutionary act.
                                                     --George Orwell



              I am impoverished if not to live through my heart, inside
       out from the throbbing cave, flush in my body earth, in my own flesh.
       I brush humanity's blood color-stick, Warrior Compassion, on my lips,
     wearing it there, a braggart, proud everyone will see that red that says,
       "I am fearless," my fair-eyed face etched with Zophkeil lines of Justice.

        My chore is necessarily to create my mind as my own, as my servant.
    To make a stand on the antithesis of what I already know, out of purity, sure
      to demystify the polar checkered history of injustice, color blind, to be free.
      "We shall overcome," the man named King's sonant rang in humane truths
       indeed, let freedom rise in our truth seeking throats and come over us all.

       Nary weary the heart dances, dipping, baptizing the tamed mind in equity.
   The two collide, as if lusty dense bodies, and emotion is bred; the breath-ahhh
    the voice, the medium of Life Art, the graffitist spray paint of feelings, aloud
     a brassy, twisty, turny kaleidoscope glissade body of ups and downs, skating
          on thin ice, chin up safely in gutsy Mariah's embrace, not to crack...

     Not to crack under the load of bigots, uninformed optimists, and scaredy cats.
      Those who ring their hands, espousing, 'just the way it is, can't be helped.'
     An illusory veil lies at their truth-vacant eyes, blind-faithers married to injustice,
all the while impervious for how divorced of equality they have become, out of touch.
       Quaking in their disavowed hearts, they are a pernicious sign of the times.


Black and White in the newscasts, in the newspapers--race-war, death vision.
Black and White movies, old text books, novels, propagate invisible division.
Black and White society and standards and manners and expectations and, "Shit!"
Black and White caught drowning in a sea of 'it just doesn't get better than this.'
Black and White--"WILL YOU JUST LET US BE? WE want OUR freedom, Now!"

         Look at me, look at my skin, the living shell a paler shade of color.
      I protest, "White this does not I make, Caucasian American is my fate."
     In my brethren. look to their skin, the living shell a deeper shade of color.
      I protest, "Black this does not one make, African American is my fate."
                  Will we ever understand, "We are first the human race."


--V

Today's mighty oak is just yesterday's nut that held its ground.
------
Life may not be the party we hoped for, but while we're here we might as well dance.
------
If you spin around on your chair really fast, things around here will make a lot more sense.

lol

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Hmmmm... I'm going to have to figure out that quote thing.

--V

Today's mighty oak is just yesterday's nut that held its ground.
------
Life may not be the party we hoped for, but while we're here we might as well dance.
------
If you spin around on your chair really fast, things around here will make a lot more sense.

lol

12 (edited by phlux 2004-03-30 11:39:32)

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Infinite conscious,
God pouring God into God.
Folding of all thought.

A bead on a string,
All theory passing through me,
all possible paths.

Linked by common threads,
A web of conscious beings,
see your thoughts I'm-pact.

Yourself, others - raised,
all relatives - in theory.
Shared journey of Mind.

"It's hard to advance freedom in a country that has been strangled by tyranny." - G.W. Bush 04/13/2004

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Haiku....meaning a poem? I used to write poetry when I was young. Very odd, but of course the education system got me off of that...

Climbing the well,
Revelations of thought,
Silent as a stream,
Powered by illusions,
Sizzling in resonance.

Age of Acquarius,
at the end of hell,
11 becomes twelve,
Gifted sight to the blind,
the truth is mocked.

Veiled forever to the masse,
uplifted to those who dare,
courage marks the milestone,
the point of no return,

Solar and micro alike,
left-age control,
keeps the mighty,
not so bright,

Arising to escape,
the moment is drawn,
climb one step further,
and be free of it all.

(rubs his rusty head and blushes)

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Sorry for putting another one up, but my feminine tendencies are begging to place some girly-poems up. I say "girl-poems' hoping that there aren't any feminists on the forum? (hoping at least)

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A meadow in despair,
the sun has drawn,
gravity moves the mice,
the sheep follow,

Darkness tilts,
concepts shed light,
the flowers bloom,

Deceit wears love,
the bird is shot,
hope is lost,

Vigilant sheep,
agendas brewing,
decisive moves,
viva la resistance. hehe