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			<description><![CDATA[<p>Use active voice.</p>]]></description>
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			<pubDate>Sun, 29 Jan 2006 14:28:08 +0000</pubDate>
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			<description><![CDATA[<p>I am curious, do you mean writting in terms of on a message board for example, or when publishing and submitting work for school?</p><p>Because writting could be based on a point of view, could it not?</p><p>Words already do not capture the essence of experience, so why not make it fun and write however you choose to write!</p><p>if someone would like to write without capital letters.. let it be so!</p><p>IF SOMEONE WOULD LIKE TO WRITE ALL IN CAPS... let it be so!</p><p>fi soemnoe wulud lkie ot wirte mssey.. let it be so!</p><p>I seh be creative when writting, even find your own special style of writting.&nbsp; If everyone followed the same rules, would it not look the same?</p><p>Just putting a different perspective out there.</p><p>Your tips are great! and thank you! <img src="https://forum.noblerealms.org/img/smilies/smile.png" width="15" height="15" alt="smile" /></p>]]></description>
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			<pubDate>Sat, 07 Jan 2006 16:52:34 +0000</pubDate>
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			<description><![CDATA[<p>Fantastic tips Jen... just what I was looking for! I actually borrowed some books on writing well from the library recently but they take too long to read. You have done a terrific job at summarising a lot of things!</p>]]></description>
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			<pubDate>Sat, 07 Jan 2006 07:20:53 +0000</pubDate>
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			<description><![CDATA[<p>Cliff&#039;s Notes continued...</p><p> RULES OF COMPOSITION&nbsp; </p><p><strong>Make the paragraph the unit of composition: one paragraph to each topic</strong>&nbsp; </p><p> As a rule, begin each paragraph with a topic sentence; end it in conformity with the beginning.</p><p>1. the topic sentence comes at or near the beginning;&nbsp; &nbsp; </p><p>2. the succeeding sentences explain or establish or develop the statement made in the topic sentence; and&nbsp; &nbsp;</p><p> 3. the final sentence either emphasizes the thought of the topic sentence or states some important consequence.&nbsp; Use the active voice:&nbsp; &nbsp; I shall always remember my first visit to Boston.&nbsp; This is much better than:&nbsp; My first visit to Boston will always be remembered by me.&nbsp; Put statements in positive form:&nbsp; &nbsp; He was not very often on time.&nbsp; He usually came late.&nbsp; He did not think that studying Latin was much use.&nbsp; He thought the study of Latin useless.&nbsp; The Taming of the Shrew is rather weak in spots. Shakespeare does not&nbsp; portray Katharine as a very admirable character, nor does Bianca remain&nbsp; long in memory as an important character in Shakespeare&#039;s works.&nbsp; The women in The Taming of the Shrew are unattractive. Katharine is&nbsp; disagreeable, Bianca insignificant.&nbsp; &nbsp;</p><p><strong>Omit needless words!</strong>&nbsp; &nbsp; </p><p>The question as to whether = whether (the question whether)&nbsp; there is no doubt but that = no doubt (doubtless)&nbsp; used for fuel purposes = used for fuel&nbsp; he is a man who = he&nbsp; in a hasty manner = hastily&nbsp; this is a subject which = this subject&nbsp; His story is a strange one.&nbsp; = His story is strange.&nbsp; &nbsp;</p><p><strong>Avoid a succession of loose sentences.</strong></p><p><strong>Express co-ordinate ideas in similar form:</strong></p><p> Formerly, science was taught by the textbook method, while now the&nbsp; laboratory method is employed = Formerly, science was taught by the textbook method; now it is taught by the&nbsp; laboratory method.&nbsp; </p><p><strong>Keep related words together:</strong></p><p> Wordsworth, in the fifth book of The Excursion, gives a minute&nbsp; description of this church = In the fifth book of The Excursion, Wordsworth gives a minute description of this&nbsp; church.</p><p> Cast iron, when treated in a Bessemer converter, is changed into&nbsp; steel = By treatment in a Bessemer converter, cast iron is changed into steel.&nbsp; </p><p> <strong>In summaries, keep to one tense:</strong></p><p> &quot;An unforeseen chance prevents Friar John from delivering Friar Lawrence&#039;s letter to Romeo. Juliet, meanwhile, owing to her father&#039;s arbitrary change of the day set&nbsp; for her wedding, has been compelled to drink the potion on Tuesday night, with the result that Balthasar informs Romeo of her supposed death before Friar Lawrence&nbsp; learns of the nondelivery of the letter.&quot;</p><p><strong>Place the emphatic words of a sentence at the end:</strong></p><p>Humanity has hardly advanced in fortitude since that time, though it has&nbsp; advanced in many other ways = Humanity, since that time, has advanced in many other ways, but it has hardly&nbsp; advanced in fortitude.<br />.<br />This steel is principally used for making razors, because of its hardness. = Because of its hardness, this steel is principally used in making razors.</p>]]></description>
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			<pubDate>Tue, 03 Jan 2006 09:39:44 +0000</pubDate>
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			<description><![CDATA[<p>Cliff&#039;s Notes:&nbsp; The Elements of Style by Strunk and White</p><br /><p><strong>Form the possessive singular of nouns with &#039;s:</strong></p><p> Charles&#039;s friend<br /> Burns&#039;s poems<br /> the witch&#039;s malice</p><p> <strong>In a series of three or more terms with a single conjunction, use a comma after each term except the last :</strong></p><p> red, white, and blue<br /> honest, energetic, but headstrong<br /> He opened the letter, read it, and made a note of its contents. </p><p><strong>Enclose parenthetic expressions between commas:</strong> </p><p>The best way to see a country, unless you are pressed for time, is to travel on foot.</p><p> <strong>Place a comma before and or but introducing an independent clause:</strong></p><p> The early records of the city have disappeared, and the story of its first years can no longer be reconstructed. <br />The situation is perilous, but there is still one chance of escape. </p><p><strong>Do not join independent clauses by a comma:</strong></p><p>&nbsp; &nbsp;Stevenson&#039;s romances are entertaining; they are full of exciting adventures.<br /> It is nearly half past five; we cannot reach town before dark.</p><p><strong>Do not break sentences in two:</strong></p><p> I met them on a Cunard liner several years ago. Coming home from Liverpool to New York.<br /> He was an interesting talker. A man who had traveled all over the world, and lived in half a dozen countries.</p><p> <strong>A participial phrase at the beginning of a sentence must refer to the grammatical subject:</strong></p><p> Walking slowly down the road, he saw a woman accompanied by two children. </p><p><strong>Divide words at line-ends, in accordance with their formation and pronunciation:</strong></p><p>&nbsp; know-ledge (not knowl-edge); Shake-speare (not Shakes-peare); de-scribe (not des-cribe); atmo-sphere (not atmos-phere)</p>]]></description>
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			<pubDate>Tue, 03 Jan 2006 09:36:00 +0000</pubDate>
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			<description><![CDATA[<div class="quotebox"><cite>Auendove wrote:</cite><blockquote><p>Well, yeah, some context might have helped! <img src="https://forum.noblerealms.org/img/smilies/lol.png" width="15" height="15" alt="lol" /></p></blockquote></div><p><img src="https://forum.noblerealms.org/img/smilies/big_smile.png" width="15" height="15" alt="big_smile" /></p><div class="quotebox"><blockquote><p>And, this was the short and uncomplicated sentence I was referring to in my post. <img src="https://forum.noblerealms.org/img/smilies/wink.png" width="15" height="15" alt="wink" /></p><div class="quotebox"><cite>Auendove wrote:</cite><blockquote><p>True.</p></blockquote></div></blockquote></div><p>Well here&#039;s an even shorter and less complicated one in response:</p><p>OH!</p><p><img src="https://forum.noblerealms.org/img/smilies/wink.png" width="15" height="15" alt="wink" /></p>]]></description>
			<author><![CDATA[null@example.com (Jen)]]></author>
			<pubDate>Mon, 02 Jan 2006 00:03:09 +0000</pubDate>
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			<description><![CDATA[<div class="quotebox"><cite>Jen wrote:</cite><blockquote><p>Sometimes, as an editor, I feel more like a translator. <img src="https://forum.noblerealms.org/img/smilies/wink.png" width="15" height="15" alt="wink" /></p></blockquote></div><p>Well, yeah, some context might have helped! <img src="https://forum.noblerealms.org/img/smilies/lol.png" width="15" height="15" alt="lol" /></p><p>And, this was the short and uncomplicated sentence I was referring to in my post. <img src="https://forum.noblerealms.org/img/smilies/wink.png" width="15" height="15" alt="wink" /></p><div class="quotebox"><cite>Auendove wrote:</cite><blockquote><p>True.</p></blockquote></div>]]></description>
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			<pubDate>Sun, 01 Jan 2006 23:33:52 +0000</pubDate>
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			<description><![CDATA[<div class="quotebox"><cite>Auendove wrote:</cite><blockquote><div class="quotebox"><cite>Jen wrote:</cite><blockquote><p>LOL...very funny, Auendove!</p></blockquote></div><p>True.</p><br /><p>The shortest sentence I ever wrote, I just wrote. It was soooo uncomplicated....</p><p>ROTFLMAO!!!</p></blockquote></div><p>Well, it is <strong>relatively</strong> short and uncomplicated now: </p><p>She had to first be taken into my heart center to transmute her powerful, powerful sense of unabandonment where others&#039; welfare was concerned. = I took her into my heart and helped to resolve her co-dependent tendencies.&nbsp; </p><p>Sometimes, as an editor, I feel more like a <strong>translator.</strong> <img src="https://forum.noblerealms.org/img/smilies/wink.png" width="15" height="15" alt="wink" /></p><p>Here&#039;s another example, of a sentence I just edited for the<br />magazine:</p> <br /><p><strong>Establishing the spectrum of relationships between the basic needs and the grander aspirations of a project is essential.</strong></p><p>which I rewrote as:<br />&nbsp; </p><p><strong>Of primary importance in any project,&nbsp; is finding a balance between the visionary aspect and the material requirements.</strong></p><div class="quotebox"><blockquote><p>Happy New Year, Sisterella!</p></blockquote></div><p>Happy New Year to you too, Babe, and all members of NR!</p>]]></description>
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			<pubDate>Sun, 01 Jan 2006 20:19:07 +0000</pubDate>
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			<description><![CDATA[<div class="quotebox"><cite>Jen wrote:</cite><blockquote><p>LOL...very funny, Auendove!</p></blockquote></div><p>True.</p><br /><p>The shortest sentence I ever wrote, I just wrote. It was soooo uncomplicated....</p><p>ROTFLMAO!!!</p><p>Happy New Year, Sisterella!</p>]]></description>
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			<pubDate>Sun, 01 Jan 2006 10:38:34 +0000</pubDate>
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			<description><![CDATA[<p>LOL...very funny, Auendove!</p><p>Actually, I LOL&#039;ed when I first posted that sentence for<br />revision--it&#039;s so terrible.&nbsp; I would revise it thusly:&nbsp; She wasn&#039;t sure she wanted to go out with him. </p><p>Let&#039;s see what others come up with in revising your mess of a sentence!</p>]]></description>
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			<pubDate>Sun, 01 Jan 2006 09:52:44 +0000</pubDate>
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			<description><![CDATA[<div class="quotebox"><cite>Jen wrote:</cite><blockquote><p>The question as to whether she would go out with him remained to be seen.</p></blockquote></div><p>To go out with him was questionable.</p><p>or,&nbsp; Snicker! Snort!....Snicker! Snicker! Snort! Snort! <img src="https://forum.noblerealms.org/img/smilies/lol.png" width="15" height="15" alt="lol" /></p><p>To go out with her yet remained a question in his mind. Is he drawn to her by whimsy, or is she his fate? And as fate may have its way, is he to be her bane? Going out wiith her, also, is his wonder.</p><p>To go out, or not to go out...that is the question <img src="https://forum.noblerealms.org/img/smilies/big_smile.png" width="15" height="15" alt="big_smile" /> .</p><p><img src="https://forum.noblerealms.org/img/smilies/tongue.png" width="15" height="15" alt="tongue" /></p><p>Now, take on this mess of a sentence--</p><p>She had to first be taken into my heart center to transmute her powerful, powerful sense of unabandonment where others&#039; welfare was concerned.</p>]]></description>
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			<pubDate>Sun, 01 Jan 2006 08:05:07 +0000</pubDate>
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			<description><![CDATA[<p>Naturalness is important, yes, but of course, what is natural to one person is unnatural to another.&nbsp; We speak differently just as we write differently. There are people, but not very many, whose speech is<br />as precise and concise as written speech ideally would be. They sound natural, because it comes naturally to them, but again, this is not the norm for most people.</p><p>I was surprised the first time i was sent an interview for editing. I had assumed that the many interviews I&#039;d read were verbatim exchanges.&nbsp; Nope!&nbsp; I had to edit the run-on sentences, the repetition, and cut out the a lot of words.&nbsp; And I&#039;ve done the same with every single interview I&#039;ve edited since then.</p><p>So yes, artichoke, we need to clean it up, as you said, but usually quite a bit more than a &quot;little.&quot;</p><p>Anyone want to try their hand at revising this sentence?</p><p><strong>The question as to whether she would go out with him remained to be seen.</strong></p>]]></description>
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			<pubDate>Sun, 01 Jan 2006 04:10:48 +0000</pubDate>
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			<description><![CDATA[<div class="quotebox"><cite>artichoke wrote:</cite><blockquote><p>I think the secret to write the same way you would talk.&nbsp; Well maybe clean it up a little, but good writing is no more formal than good speech, although it can be better organized.<br />!</p></blockquote></div><p>Good point! For me this seems difficult to do for some reason. Perhaps because I am not able to see feedback (facial expressions, etc.) and I&#039;m not sure if what I&#039;m expressing is being understood by the reader, in the exact manner I&#039;ve intended.</p>]]></description>
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			<pubDate>Sat, 31 Dec 2005 14:31:34 +0000</pubDate>
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			<description><![CDATA[<p>I think the secret to write the same way you would talk.&nbsp; Well maybe clean it up a little, but good writing is no more formal than good speech, although it can be better organized.</p><p>Anyway that&#039;s what I learned a few years ago.</p><p>And now it&#039;s easier because it&#039;s considered okay to just split infinitives even in writing!</p>]]></description>
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			<pubDate>Sat, 31 Dec 2005 09:12:32 +0000</pubDate>
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			<description><![CDATA[<div class="quotebox"><cite>seemefly wrote:</cite><blockquote><div class="quotebox"><cite>Jen wrote:</cite><blockquote><p>Just now, I was editing some of my own stuff, and I realized the main secret of writing well.&nbsp; Can anyone guess what it is?</p></blockquote></div><p>How many guesses before you reveal the answer?<br /> My guess is- get rid of the ego, make it understandable to many.(I&#039;m not saying you are egotistical, just speaking in general to all writers)</p></blockquote></div><p>Um, a couple more guesses, I guess <img src="https://forum.noblerealms.org/img/smilies/smile.png" width="15" height="15" alt="smile" />&nbsp; Or if there are no more guesses, I&#039;ll reveal it.</p><p>the answer has to do with a more technical aspect of writing than you gave--which however is connected to the soul aspect.</p>]]></description>
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			<pubDate>Sat, 31 Dec 2005 04:45:00 +0000</pubDate>
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